Re: XXIII. 3 What He'll Say, More or Less
Love the equation of romance/sex with what's essentially business, for better or worse. Love the double entendre in the last line . . . "not my type" -- very good! And good luck . . . I loved what I...
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I like "If it knocks at least one of his socks off" - makes me wonder, how about three? Esther
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Easy to picture this guy just sitting there reading you work. Perfect ending. Hope the socks do fly!Judy
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Yes - it's so sadly true! It's all very subjective - love the metaphor - the image of the guy in his oak rockerI really don't understand the whole thing. Why do we want to be published? Is it as basic...
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Jude, Love that question. My answer would be "Yes! Yes! Oh, Yes!"
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Yeah, the sock line is especially great. But the whole narrative is good. Rejection! Urgh!
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Very clever metaphor. Well developed. I like!
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Thanks Toni! Nice to see ya around these here parts :-) Let me know if your up to a 7-in-7 next week. I might just keep a-going.
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Hi back atcha! I won't be around much for the next couple of days -- though maybe I'll be able to post quickie comments via my iPad. Not sure yet about next week. . . . .
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Mignon,I'm thinking to go for another round (of writing... I'm all sexed out for the present)Judy
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I might be good for another round, given a few days off in between.
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Me too -- any time after next Wednesday. Esther
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Shall we start on Thursday? Sorry I disappeared for a few days, didn't post my last poem--sick as heck and the downpours aren't helping, but Thursday there'll be sun again. Mignon
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